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Though my parents will pay for expenses, I will also take some part-time jobs at school to get money on my own, or work in communities in order to meet my expenses for the second and subsequent year. Though my parents will pay for expenses, I will also take some part-time jobs at school to get money on my own, or work in communities in order to meet my expenses for the second and subsequent years