高一英语作文模拟题:我最喜欢的运动

文章高级词汇使用熟练，但请作者增加词汇丰富度；作者句法知识扎实，但从句稍微偏少；建议作者增加过程性词汇的使用。

Though my parents will pay for expenses, I will also take some part-time jobs at school to get money on my own, or work in communities in order to meet my expenses for the second and subsequent years. Though my parents will pay for expenses, I will also take some part-time jobs at school to get money on my own, or work in communities in order to meet my expenses for the second and subsequent years.