题目:On maintaining trust 保持信任
字数:150满分:100分
错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文中词汇表达不够丰富,但部分高级词汇用的比较灵活;上下文衔接欠佳,文章层次欠清晰,建议加强连接词和衔接词的积累。
Someone said,Trust made people communicate free and happy.You can see so many examples in our lifes. In school,when teachers and his/her students stay trust then the class can operate normally. Between friends,trust is a more important situation. Friends bollow money to you and he trust you may give back to him.