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2009年高考英语作文(全国卷11)

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【试题回放】假定你是李华,正在英国接受英语培训,住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东Mrs. Wilson 不在家,你准备外出,请给Mrs. Wilson 写一留言条,内容包括: 

  1.外出购物

  2.替房东还书

  3.Tracy 来电话留言:1)咖啡屋(Bolton Coffee)见面取消
  2)此事已告知Susan 
  3) 尽快回电

  注意:1. 词数100左右;  2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯

用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
评语:

文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;全文结构较为严谨。

用户练习作文:

Dear Mrs Wilson, I'm Li Hua.For the reason that I plan to go out for a while but you are not in ,there is something I would like to tell you. Knowing that the fridge has been empty for three days,I decide to go shopping this morning,and certainly, a lot of food and drinks will be brought home.Besides,the novel you set by the bed has reached its deadline,and it's going to be returned to the library this morning,too.Most importantly,your friend Tracy gave a phone call and said the meet at the Botton Coffee had canceled,while Susan has been told.Last but not least,it would be better if you could ring her back at your earliest convenience. Have a nice day! Yours, Li Hua

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