单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;行文流畅,但衔接词比较少。
Tom is best my friend.He is a good boy.Now,he is twelve years old.We always go to school together.In the class,he is a good student.He favorite class is math.But I don't like math.So he often help me finish the homework.At the home,he is a good child.He help his mother clean the room.