作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些高级词汇的使用也比较灵活;增加一些从句的使用,文章会更不错;不能熟练使用过渡词,文章结构欠佳。
I have a good friend ,his name is Chun yuan ,we play together since in childhood.he is too shy to talk to girls .Although he is a tall and handsome guy .When we grow up .We separate from homeland .but we still keep touch in social media.learn a lot from psychology .and i will treat my friend as my family members as well .i do like my good friend.