文中词汇表达贫乏,但是单词拼写做的不错;加强一些长句和复杂句的使用;建议增加衔接词和过渡词的使用。
There is a new teacher in my class. who being teach our English .Her name is Lucy .she got a long brown hair .Dress a good dress. that s looks like very powerful .Since she became our English teacher .We got a well score in every exam in school .Both we are very happy