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小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

发布时间:2013-05-15 11:36浏览次数:36951
要求:
用英文描述下自己的好朋友。
用户的作文(系统评分55.5分
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文中用词灵活多样,但要注意增加使用高级词汇;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;文章采用了适当的过渡词和衔接词,结构比较严谨。

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Today is the first work day which since spring festival. I got up early to work. Outside is cold and the sky is gray and rare people on the road. I had just catched the bus at the bus stop. It is different that a few people in the bus. When I got off, I see the stop is closed which i often eat breakfast's. a sign on the door, it said 'sorry, everybody. we are resting, if you miss us, please go to here in Feb-five'. in about ten minutes, i found a dumpling shop which has many people waited for. i hurry to the crowd at the last.soon my colleague, second brother join us. when we in the middle of crowd, my colleague first brother and big teacher arrived. they said "can you bring us some food for breakfast". i looked at them and smiled then said 'brothers, all of the stop is closed unless this one, so please tell me what food do you like' then two of my colleague arrived too. they tell us what food do they like. at last we bought lots of food in a big bag.

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