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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者英语功底扎实，可适当调整文中从句数量；作者能较熟练地使用一定的高级词汇，但拼写方面要再接再厉。
Should we be careful with money There are a commen penomenon in our daily life that so many students be careful with money. Many people think it is not a correct opinion of consumption because the cheaper goods may do not have ideal quality as thought, but in my opinion,it is necessary for our students to be careful with money. First of all, it is not necessary for us to buy so many expensive clouthes as adults who need to appear in some formai occations. We just need to make ourselves looked neat and beautiful so to have enough confidence to live and study. Secondly,we get money maninly from our parents, and they work hard to make a living. It is not responsible to spend their money without consideration. In conclusion, we should spend money apporpriately, in other words, we should be careful with money.
