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字数：300 满分：100分
语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；作者句法知识掌握的不够好，可适当增加从句的使用；文中词汇表达灵活多样，也能较丰富地使用高级词汇。
Should we be careful with money There is a common phenomenon in our daily life that so many students be careful with money. Many people think taht it is not a correct opinion of consumption because the cheaper goods may do not have good quality as thought, but in my opinion,it is necessary for our students to be careful with money. First of all, it is not necessary for us to buy so many expensive clothes as adults who need to emerge in some formal occasions. We just need to make ourselves looked neat and beautiful so to have enough confidence to live and study. Secondly,we get money mainly from our parents, and they work hard to make a living. It is not responsible to spend their money without consideration. In conclusion, we should spend money appropriately, in other words, we should be careful with money.
