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作者词汇基础不错，还请增加高级词汇的使用；句式变化多样，句法方面做的很棒；过渡词和衔接词使用的比较不错。
Dear Amy, I'm Li Hua, a Senior Three student in Xinhua Middle School in China.I've learnt from the newspaper that you are badly in pain because of lung cancer.Therefore,I'm writing to comfort you and give you a helping hand. When I saw the news at first sight,I was shocked by your strong willpower to get through the disease.And certainly,we all firmly believe that you will be better soon.Besides,you don't need to worry about the money for your treatment,the fact will be told to my classmates if you don't mind,and we will appeal to the whole school to make donations to you.Thus,all you need to do is nothing but try your best to cooperate with the doctors and get better and better day by day. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua
