作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;作者句法知识扎实,但文中从句数量稍显不足;行文稍欠流畅,应适当增加连接词的使用。
Don't Judge Things by Our Ears and Eyes Sometimes life is not that clear as you may think. What we see or hear may not be the truth. So we need to understand that it is unwise to draw conclusions by our first sight and hearing. Life is full of uncertainties. Only when we understand some things very clearly can we say that we have conclusions. If we just judge other people or other things by our first sight,eventually we are still confused by the essence of the problem. For example,when we are having an exam,a difficult question stuck our mind. What will we do?Of course,most people will think deeply and try to find the answer. However,some people will check the answer by their first thought. They may trust their first thought. When the scores of the exam were published,we found that those students who check the answer by their first thought get lower marks. Why this happens? Because when we are thinking,the potential consciousness plays its role. And it also proves that it's unwise to handle things in a quick way. In addition,we need to solve different kinds of problems in a systematic way.
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