作者词汇量积累很好,高级词汇积累要重视;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练;行文稍显不流畅,应增加文中衔接词的使用。
When I was a child, my grandfather usually tell me:" do everything, you should be patient." however, I don't know this meaning. I haven't thinking for something, which I should think exceedingly much. So I always doing some wrong thing. And make my parents or friends unhappy. So I deem that after we seeing something or listening something.
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