2015年高考作文优秀范文：如何学好中文

从句使用不足，建议增加长句和复杂句的使用；作者词汇表达恰当灵活，另外请仔细检查词汇的拼写；不能熟练使用过渡词，基本没有衔接词。

Dear David I am extremely happy when i listhen that you will study Chinese in Beijing. Consequently, i will spare no efforts to tell you how to learn Chinese immidately. First, you must know practise is to momery what sunshine is to flower. So you are supposed to communicate with chinese. It is widely known that speaking is of great benefit to you. Secondly, I suggest that you should watch some films or listen music. What's more, you should learn chinese cultrual. Becasue, in my opinion, it is the first step for you that study chinese. Your early reply to this letter will be highly appreciated. Your Friend Wang Ming