山东济宁邹城一中高一上学期期末英语作文

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encouragement is just like fire in the dark.It is so warm that I really appreciat.I remenber one day when it was so hopeless,I stay in my classroom with a heavy mind.It is beacause I failed my exams.The weather became bad as my mood.I just had no way to show my grades and I cryed. Then a hand with a piece of napkin reached in front of me.He smiled and said simultaneously"You can't cry and you should be brave. ''.With his encouragement I smiled too.And I replied "Absolutly.".I treuly believe it is the force of encouragement that saved me from dificulties.