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Encouragement is just like fire in the dark. It is so warm that I really appreciate. I remember one day when it was so hopeless,I stay in my classroom with a heavy mind. It is beacause I failed my exams. The weather became bad as my mood.I just had no way to show my grades and I cried. Then a hand with a piece of napkin reached in front of me. He smiled and said simultaneously"You can't cry and you should be brave. ''. With his encouragement I smiled too. And I replied "Absolutly.". I truly believe it is the force of encouragement that saved me from dificulties.
