2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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Dear friend, I am very delighted to konw that you will come to my hometown,I have decided to show you around my hometown.When it comes to the most interestingplace,the Zumian is the attractive place indoubtfully. Zumian is not far away from my hometown,which we just need to take a bus for about 10 mintues.It is a very big square and the shopping center.Every feast,the people will come there to play or buy goods.