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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33617[网页划词已开启]
要求:
Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

字数:300 满分:100分

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。

用户练习作文:

Nowadays,many people especially students try to save their money desperately in daily life.I think it is a good habit and excellent advantage.I don't think it can't make people become smart consumers.Instead,it is a improver. First,for many poor families,they have no many money to consume.In order to support life,they must save money.Second,luxury is equal to waste.When people become rich,they will try to enjoy themselves.But generally speaking,excessive luxury is a absolutely waste.Third,If we are careful with our money in daily life,we will become consumers on a budget.We can learn how to pay least to buy good things.I often collect many kinds of coupons and shop around.Therefore,I often just need to pay less,I can buy things that I want.To be honest,it does save a lot of my money. In a word,there is no doubt that to be careful with money in daily life is a good idea,it will make us become more clever capable.At the same time,it can teach us how to be a qualified consumer.

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