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字数:300 满分:100分
采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;错误句子很少,但从句使用不熟练。
Nowadays,many people especially students try to save their money desperately in daily life.I think it is a good habit and excellent advantage.I don't think it can't make people become smart consumers.Instead,it is a improver. First,for many poor families,they have no many money to consume.In order to support life,they must save money.Second,luxury is equal to waste.When people become rich,they will try to enjoy themselves.But generally speaking,excessive luxury is a absolutely waste.Third,If we are careful with our money in daily life,we will become consumers on a budget.We can learn how to pay least to buy good things.I often collect many kinds of coupons and shop around.Therefore,I often just need to pay less,I can buy things that I want.To be honest,it does save a lot of my money. In a word,there is no doubt that to be careful with money in daily life is a good idea,it will make us become more clever capable.At the same time,it can teach us how to be a qualified consumer.