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Lang Lang is a pianist. He was born in Shenyang, China in 1982. He started to learn to play the piano at the age of 3. When he was 14, he went to America to learn music. He has given concerts in many different places around the world. And he has performed with many famous musicians in the world. He is so excellent that he has won a lot of prizes. I think he is one the most successful pianists in the world and he is a great young man. I like his performance very much because it’s really exciting.
