作者高级词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;简单句偏多了;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
Langlang is born in 1982,he learn piano in age 3.In his 14,he went to Amarica learnpiano. Langlang get mang prizes and give concerts many perform musicians.So I think he is a famous pianist,also he is a try hard genius.I think I can learn mang things from him.I am very love his music.His music give me relaxing.And his music can help me rest myself.