作者高级词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;简单句偏多了;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
Langlang is born in 1982, he learn piano in age 3. In his 14,he went to Amarica learn piano. Langlang get mang prizes and give concerts many perform musicians. So I think he is a famous pianist, also he is a try hard genius.I think I can learn mang things from him. I am very love his music.His music give me relaxing. And his music can help me rest myself.