作者高级词汇方面要多累积,词汇表达不够丰富;简单句偏多了;层次不够清晰,文中很少使用衔接词。
Langlang is born in 1982, he learn piano in age 3. In his 14, he went to Amarica learn piano. Langlang get mang prizes and give concerts many perform musicians. So I think he is a famous pianist, also he is a try hard genius.I think I can learn mang things from him. I am very love his music.His music give me relaxing. And his music can help me rest myself.