2012年12月英语六级作文真题(II):人与电脑

作者句法不错，但是文章整体句子稍微偏短；作者能较灵活地使用词汇，学术词汇使用较恰当，但存在一些拼写错误；层次不清晰，几乎没有使用衔接词。

When it comes to computer and man,different people have different views.Some people hold that computer does really convenient for human while other people disagree.As far as I'm concerned,computer is very useful for us. The resons will be listed as followed. First,we have saved much of our time to refer to information.When we meet some questions we don't know or some items we don't understand,we only need to Google or Baidu.We needn't go to the liberary to figure out them.Second, we can share many things in the Internet all over the world.People from different contries can communicate with each other and know different backgroung.What's more,it promotes the economic development of Internet.We can easily buy things online.I like shopping online.It can buy many things without going out. As a final anlisis,I do think computer does good to man.As time goes by,we cannot do most of thing without computer.