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Draw a conclusion just look and hear is made no sense. Believeing your eyes,it may a striking fallacy of your eyes. Provided that you believe your ear ,you will lose the real voice . It is a widespread currrent that only seeing is ture . In constract ,digesting the conbination of seeing and listerning is a foudation of right . There are two resons witch is as follow , first the conclusion contain nothing that base on the foudation of apearent,which may be a wrong message as the principle of the magician have gave the audience. Second ,this behave is as a ribot working which are a chief camare. However,drawing a conclusion after what you seeing and hearing so as to a smart man rather than a camare.
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