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Draw a conclusion just look and hear is made no sense. It is a striking fallacy of your eyes,when you believe your eyes. Provided that you believe your ear,you will lose the real voice. It is a widespread current that only seeing is true . In contract ,digesting the combination of seeing and listening is a foundation of right . There are two reasons witch is as follow, first the conclusion contain nothing that base on the surface foundation,which may be a wrong message as the principle of the magician have gave the audience. Second ,this behave is as a ribot working which are a chief camare. However,drawing a conclusion after what you seeing and hearing so as to a smart man rather than a camare.
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