采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;可适当增加几条从句;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较丰富地使用高级词汇。
Draw a conclusion just look and hear is made no sense. It is a striking fallacy of your eyes,when you believe your eyes. Provided that you believe your ear,you will lose the real voice. It is a widespread current that only seeing is true . In contract ,digesting the combination of seeing and listening is a foundation of right . There are two reasons, first the conclusion was contained nothing and base on the wrong foundation,which may be a wrong message as the principle of the magician show. Second ,this is as a robot working which are a chief camera. However,drawing a conclusion after what you seeing and hearing so as to a smart man rather than a camare.
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