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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分80.0分
评语:

语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

用户练习作文:

As far as I'm concerned, I believe snap judgments can never be trusted. There are two reasons to explain that as follows: Firstly, snap judgments often happens when make a conclusion in a short time without thinking twice. Usually, some important points could be missed when a snap judgment comes which could lead to bad consequences as people may not forsee the long-term interests. Secondly, show resourcefulness in an emergency merely happens to a few people.it can't be denied the fact that showing resourcefulness in an emergency merely happens to a few people instead of our normal people. As a matter of fact, it never happens when he or she lack of enough knowledge before judgments. For example, how do you feel about him or her when you see someone in first sight? It is very rude to critisize them by their looks without getting to know them more, isn't it? Because it may be the truth that he or she are just tired to dress up today, and in fact he is a judge on working days with wearing serious suit.

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