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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分79.0分
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作者词汇基本功不错,建议今后多用高级词汇;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。

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As far as I'm concerned, I believe snap judgments can never be trusted. There are two reasons to explain that as follows: Firstly, snap judgments often happen when making a conclusion in a short time without thinking twice. Usually, some important points could be missed when a snap judgment comes which could lead to bad consequences as people may not forsee the long-term interests. Secondly, it can't be denied the fact that showing resourcefulness in an emergency merely happens to a few people instead of most of people. As a matter of fact, it never happens when he or she lacks of enough knowledge before judgments. For example, how do you feel about him or her when you see someone in first sight? It is very rude to critisize them by their looks without getting to know them more, isn't it? Because it may be the truth that he or she are just tired to dress up today, and in fact he is judge on working days with wearing serious suit.

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