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In China,as we all know,tourism is developing rapidly now.At the same time,some people hold the opinion that many tourists will bring harm to the environment,but I don't think so. First,the development of tourism bring so many tourists to travel and visit,which can develop the economy of the place and improve the level of life.Second,the visitors from all over the world come here to visit,which can broaden the horizons of local residents.Finally,some people think tourists will bring harm to the environment,but I believe that there are still many quality people around the world.Besides,not only is protecting the environment the duty of tourists,but also it is the mission of local people and government In my opinion,I don't think the development of tourism will do harm to the environment.Instead,it will be not harmful and it will bring benefit.
