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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17572
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

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作者词汇基本功很好,高级词汇表达也比较恰当;文章衔接手法恰当;作者句法知识掌握的不够好,可适当增加从句的使用。

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A research revealed that Chinese students are more likely to pay bills by cellphones. It was co-conducted by Chinese media colleges and Ant Financial which collected consuming date from 10 million students in over 4,000 universities. The research found that 92 percent of young people who were born in 1990s spend 5,900 USD in 2016, it jumps 97 percent than 2015. Chen Lin, a student in one of Beijing Universities said, she has been using mobile pay for a long time and only carry 100-200 RMB in cash nowadays. She said, “Almost all shopping in school campus and nearby areas can be paid by phone and campus card wherever you are in canteen or bookstore or supermarket.” Even the least noticeable stall is fine with mobile pay, she added. Another amazing finding is that girls would be inclined to pay by phone than boys, but boys spent more. Huhao is student in Shanghai and found that he spent 16,000 online which accounted 70 percent of expenditure in all year. He said, boys spent more because they didn’t shop round, from his perspective. “Besides, sometimes boys have to buy gifts or pay for girlfriends, this is another factor.” He added.

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