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托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

发布时间:2013-08-19 17:06浏览次数:17590
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作文题目:

Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? 

Snap judgments can never be trusted.

Use reasons and examples to support your opinion.

草率的判断不可信。你同意这种说法吗?给出原因和例子。

字数要求:300字以内。

用户的作文(系统评分81.5分
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可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉;可适当增加连接词和衔接词的使用。

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The environment in office is very vulnerable. The difference in the way of thinking and working can cause collisions. In such an environment of working together in the long term, it is unavoidable to see this happens. Some is common, but there are always ways to relieve the tensions. Air conditioner Not everybody likes the same temperature due to differences of body feeling. When it comes to control temperature, it is easily to become a fight. Do remember that this is not your home, this is very important. Although sometimes it feels like a home because you spend most of your time here, office is a sharing space, everyone deserves equal comfort. In order to avoid this situation, please remember the temperature in the office when you dress in the morning. Or, bring a sweater to the office. The best way is to find a temperature everyone agrees. If this doesn’t work, take turns to control it. Coffee pot collision Besides the temperature of air conditioner, empty coffee pot is another potential factor to bring an office fight. Everybody likes coffee, but no one likes making it. The simplest way to keep peace is making a “make coffee” duty table. This is the simple way to reduce unnecessary fighting. It should take turns to make it fair. Also, out of respect, the one who pour the last cup of coffee should make it voluntarily. Copy machine collision The last thing to cause a fight in office is printer and copying machine. When some used up papers but fails to refill in the machine timely, collision happens.

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