采用了适当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇使用灵活,高级词汇使用较丰富;作者在句法层面做的很棒。
Nowadays,we face many environmental problems,such as haze,desertification,the global warming and so on.There is no doubt that they damage our living environment,plants,of course,and animal species.Some people think now it is too late to find the ways to solve the problems.However,other people believe that we people will find the effective measures to improve the situation.From my point of view,I support the latter. In fact,there are many measures that we can take to solve the problems.For instance,first,we should have the awareness of protecting the environment.In the current world,the environmental problems is becoming more and more serious.If we still keep the situation,it is equal to suicide.Hence we need to have the awareness and we must have the awareness.To be honest,it is very simple to alleviate or problems.For example,We can go out by foot or bike rather than cars.We can live a normal life as much as without air-conditioning,even garbage classification.Second,government can promote and encourage the policies or measures to lead people to protect and do something for protecting environment on their own. Generally speaking,as long as we have the awareness of protecting environment and solving the problems.It never will be late no matter when we are going to improve the situation.Besides,if everybody tries his best,even just limited power,the world will become more and more beautiful and colorful.