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2013年专四作文真题附范文:节约花钱

发布时间:2013-06-07 13:03浏览次数:33555
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Most of us, as students, are careful with our money in daily life: we collect all kinds of coupons(优惠券); we look for group-buy deals if we eat out or travel; we don't buy clothes unless in a sale. However, some people think that all this may not make us smart consumers. What is your opinion?

You are to write in three parts.
In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is.
In the second part, provide one or two reasons or your experience (s) to support your opinion. 
In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

You should supply an appropriate title for your composition.

Marks will be awarded for content, organization, language and appropriateness. Failure to follow the instructions may result in a loss of marks.

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Under Germany green plan, government needs to pay for prostitute service for the poor who need sex service or help in sex. The spokesman Elizabeth pointed out that doctors are entitled to proscribe for free for patients. It is legal to prostitute in German and not a taboo like many other countries. Almost every town has whorehouse in German, professional prostitutes for old dementia patients, the disabled and vest home patients has become a new trend in domestic. Sex service involves intimate caressing, sexual abuse service, physical rapist and a set of sex service which depends on different whorehouse requests. However, there is no statement in law showing that it can be reimbursed as medical expense. Their neighbor Netherland has been implemented this policy for a while, the Greens hopes to make some changes based on that. “I can imagine sex help in public financing,” Elizabeth said on newspaper. Patients need to get a medical certificate to show their sex needs are not met and have no money for prostitute. Elizabeth said, “All cities will discuss the plan on appropriate clinical service and fiancé support.” Sex coach Vanessa took over the management of vest home after served as nurse for years, she made a lot of speeches about “sexy and emotional”. “In Netherland, sex service bill paid by Health care foundation,” she said. “Recent years, we have been seeing sex workers in German, especially those who are trained for solving needs of the old.” “They know the difficulties of the old and understand they are shying and ashamed.” She added, workers in vest home would be terrified or angry when they see old people kissing or masturbate. But, professor and doctor William believes that would be humiliated.

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