托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Two decisions can be made quickly. Personal decisions without thinking can be snap judgment. On the other hand, emergency decisions made by health care workers should be short-time. They make life-charging decisions every day. Personal decisions without thinking may make life ruined as well as wrong emergency decisions may lead death. It’s always a matter of life and death. Personal decisions like marriage, enterprise or family are so important and complex that we need time to think and balance. Here, snap judgment is foolish, unconvinced and unreliable. But emergency decisions are short-time. It requires professional people to make their more convinced decision. If these judgments are not trusted, we will see more death in hospital. The fireman will not survive when they decided to turn left and right. Policemen will let bad men run away. So that snap judgment should be trusted is a twofold thing. We hope that we make good personal decisions with long-time consideration, What’s more, the emergency decision can be professional and reliable to save more people's life.