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i have a good frieng,her name iis Lucy,wealiways play together and have the same taste,for example,we like eat all kings of fruits and vegetables.BESIDES,OUR MOTHERS ARE GDOOD FRIENGDS ,TOO.WETALKED ABOUT THE HOMEWORK,COMPLIAINED THE DIFFICULTIES,WHLIE,WE SOLIVE THEM AFTER HARD THINGKING.A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A A