小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；可增加从句和复杂句的使用；文中高级词汇使用贫乏，还有些单词拼写错误。

i have a good friend called Lucy,she has a long black straight hair always wearing a shining smile.her mother is a doctor while father is a engineer.now she is a senior student majoring in econmics. we talk and cheer one up when one of us met something bad ,then we laugh at these difficulties and become more stronger.even sometimes we can not seat face to face,our heart still think about the another,maybe that is why we are good friends.