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2014年6月英语六级作文真题附范文(第1套):以貌取人

发布时间:2014-07-03 14:04浏览次数:8968
要求:

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it isunwise to judge a person by their appearance. You can give explain toillustrate your point .

You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words。

用户的作文(系统评分82.5分
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采用了恰当的衔接手法,层次清晰;文中词汇表达灵活多样请继续保持,高级词汇积累也做的很棒;作者英语功底扎实,可适当调整文中从句数量。

用户练习作文:

In our daily lives ,the phenomenon is common that if an individual is good-looking ,he has more opportunities to get a job or have romantic love.It's universally acknowledged that a person's appearance is of great importance for other people to make judgements about that person. However ,judging somebody simply just by his appearance is not advisable.For instance,Confusion ,known as a great philosopher, had proposed massive advanced principles and hypothesis, nevertheless had exaggerated big ears and thick lips.Even with a so strange appearence,he still has been respected by enormous Chinese people. Consequently we can make a conclusion that judging a man just by appearance is not wise ,and what really counts is not what a individual look like but his real talents.

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