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As my favorite writer Liucixin said,'civilize our ages instead of aging our civilization'.I deem his opinon is advisable .As a human being,our lifes is poor short which has merely 100 years.Nevertheless as long as you make good use of your time,your can outlast it. I'd like to taik about how to make our life meaningful First and foremost,i will keep studyjing all my life .It's always been said that hunman have infinite lament.And to enhance my capability,I have to memorize and understand more knowledge.Seondly,find a hobby is also of great importance for me ,I am pretty sure that devote myself to my faxvorite affairs is exceedingly enjoyble. May your life becoming increasingly meaningful!
