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使用了部分简单的长难句，可适当增加一些复杂的长句；作者用词灵活多样，但要注意文中极个别拼写错误；上下文衔接不流畅，文章结构不严谨。
As my favorite writer Liucixin said,'civilize our ages instead of aging our civilization'.I deem his opinon is advisable .As a human being,our life is poor short which has merely 100 years.Nevertheless as long as you make good use of your time,your outlast it. I'd like to taik about how to make our life meaningful.First and foremost,i will keep studying all my life .It's always said that hunman have infinite lament.And to enhance my capability,I have to memorize and understand more knowledge.Seondly,finding a hobby is also of great importance for me ,I am pretty sure that devote myself to my faxvorite affairs is exceedingly enjoyble. May your life becoming increasingly meaningful!
