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Peter
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Dear Peter,
Thanks for telling me about your problem. In fact most of the students will meet this kind of problem. I'm not surprised at it. And I think __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
David
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you should understand your mother,she is always for you,she isloveyou too,i know you want to play games ,but it's not good for your health,and if you play so much ,your will get bad marks ,although play games can make you relax ,finally i think if you forgot play games the day is bright angin ,and the sun will warm,the rianbow will on the sky ,you will a good son,and your mother'smile will on hrr face .
