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GRE写作Issue模拟题:The Importance of Science and Art

发布时间:2013-07-19 16:34浏览次数:8491
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Directions: Present your perspective on one of the issues below, using relevant reasons and/or examples to support your views.  “The function of science is to reassure; the purpose of art is to upset. Therein lies the value of each.”

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句法方面做得很棒,但是从句不多;采用了简单的衔接手法,行文流畅;作者词汇基础不错,在高级词汇的积累上还要再接再厉。

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Due to the wane in the 1600s for China, its neighbors and foreign invaders gradually took China as dinner and its civilians had no choice but to witness this tragedy happened, which is the great humiliation in history. You may feel the same way as they did if you happen to be Jewish who had been harassed for centuries and experiencing similar cruel slaughter. Before Israel established, Jewish were trained not to get any attention from others by weird behavior and to respond with gentle gesture. They don’t have to suffer any pain, not any more. Likewise, China will do the same. Many Asian countries had disagreement with their neighbors. For example, Japan. It never solves any problems with its neighbors. For a long time, China share boundaries with its neighbors due to the territory and history factors. It is good if there is a way to solve dispute. If there is not, China has to be good neighbors with other countries.

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