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中秋节 the Mid-Autumn Festival 农历 lunar calendar
赏月 enjoy the full moon 月饼 moon cake文章组织结构良好;文中从句使用不丰富,要注意个别句子错误;文中词汇表达过于贫乏,高级词汇进步空间很大,拼写错误稍多。
the mid-autumn festival is a tradition festiver in china. on the day everyone of family will be together enjoy the full moon eating mooncake .this years some people like to have a trip with family or friendly and some people like to visit friende. the day have hoilday so people will have to festiver .