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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9036
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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句法很棒,若适当增加一些从句的使用,文章会取得更好的成绩;文中词汇表达灵活多样,也能较好的使用部分高级词汇;文章衔接手法恰当。

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This is a picture worth considering. From the picture above we can see clearly that the children is washing his mother's feet. This is a warm and moving picture. As a Chinese, inherit the traditional virtues are our duty and responsibility. How importance is it to inherit traditional virtues. From my perspective, the first thing to do is to inherit the traditional filial piety. As the saying goes, filial piety is the most important of all virtues. First of all, the elderly deserve the respect due to their effort in bringing up their children and their contributions to society. What's more, the development of a nation must start from the traditional virtues. If young people do not respect the elderly, the whole of society will be a mess without respect. Therefore, the elderly should be respected by all of us. Last but not least, the influence of family is very important to the growth of children. I believe this is the importance of the inheriting the traditional virtues. Last, I hope the traditional virtues aren't forgotten by the development.

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