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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9074
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

用户的作文(系统评分78.5分
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作者词汇基础很好,也能较灵活使用高级词汇,望继续努力;语句间的衔接成分用得不错,同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富;作者句法知识扎实,可适当增加从句的使用。

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Nowadays, there has been a hot debate in the public over the issue whether one expect a reward after doing a good deed. Some think it’s human nature to want return if he gives, but other against that help others out of trouble is the basic personal quality, should not be relate with money. For me, I agree the last one. First, Good deed is the traditional virtues of the China, which has spread far and wide for thousands years, if everyone hold the idea of “No reward No help”, the spirit of Lei Feng would be disappear. Second, good deed belongs to voluntary work; personal interests should not be the purpose of helping others. The actions should be done with our true heart, when it comes to without getting paid, people would not consider unbalance in mind. Third, there is old saying goes,” One good return deserves another,” which indicates that helping others sincerely are supposed to result from unexpected rewards, such as the respect from others or a sense of achievement. To sum up, No matterdoing good deeds should get returns or not, the most important thing is when others being in trouble, we should to help them without hesitate.

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