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2013年12月英语四级作文真题附范文(第1套):网络教育

发布时间:2014-06-09 15:37浏览次数:9036
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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief account of the impact of the internet on learning and then explain why education doesn't simply mean learning to obtain information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

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文章结构不错,使用了丰富的衔接词和过渡词;可适当增加几条从句;作者词汇量积累不错,一些高级词汇的使用比较灵活,有个别拼写错误。

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Nowadays, different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect areward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given acertain reward.They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness. Also, rewards can stimulatepeople's enthusiasm to do good deeds. However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a good model and be always ready to helpothers without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble. Only if you help othersunselfishly, you can get Other's help when you need it.Besides, they maintain that one can enjoyhappiness in doing good deeds, they think, which is the best return. Weighing up these two arguments, I prefer the second one. First, being happy to help others isone of Chinese people's traditional virtues. Second, this virtue is of more significance for thecreation of a harmonious society. To conclude, it is every citizen's responsibility to do gooddeeds without expecting any reward.

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