2007年专四作文真题:关于网络交友

采用了简单的衔接手法，行文流畅；可适当增加几条从句；作者词汇表达丰富度较高，就是高级词汇用的太少。

Is It Wise to Make Friends Online ? Nowadays, with the development of the internet and technology, it is more and more common that we make friends online. For this phenonmenon, some people think it is helpful, while others think it is harmful. And in my opinion, i think it is harmful. Firstly, making friends online makes people have less opportunities and time to chat with each other. It isn't helpful for the friendship's development between people. Secondly, making friends online is dangerous more or less. As we all know, there are more and more fraud on the internet. If some people are lack of the consciousness of protecting themselves, it is so easy to cheat by others. Thirdly, making friends online is more fictitious than making friends face to face. When we are in trouble, the friends that we make face to face is more helpful than those making online. Above all, it is not wise to make friends online. We should spend more time on making friends in real. Only in this way can we show our sincere to our friends and make more good friends.