2013年5月11日雅思大作文真题:生活质量下降的原因和解决方案

语句间的衔接成分用得不错，同时文章中的过程性词汇很丰富；文中词汇使用灵活，高级词汇积累做的很棒，但拼写错误要注意；复杂句使用不错，句法规范。

In recent days, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing,and it has aroused big concern among people. After considering seriously and also some groups has launched a lot of investigation and poll regarding this topic.There are three main reasons which has connection with current dreasing life quality concern. First one is environmental pollution, for example, nowadays more and more severe air pollution threathens people's life, even sometimes people cannot enjoy basic breathing normality. Second one is healthy problem, a lot of people undergoes physical or mental suffering of different diseases. Last but not least, competition is more and more fierce in job area, people are facing bigger and bigger pressure from workload for the reason they persue better salary. But actually life is simple, you can relax it just depending a lot of easy ways, like using blue technology to be instead of high energy consuming ones during life. For body health, enhancing healthy sense should come first and learn how to relieve ourthelf from work and how to deal with the relationshipi between work and life. Let us work together to pursue high quality of life, it is easy.