从句数量偏少;作者能较熟练地使用高级词汇,但词汇积累还有很大进步空间;不能熟练使用过渡词,基本没有衔接词。
More and more students have the problems of mental health.Some students even commit suicide when they confront the problem of mental health.Consequently,it is of importance to improve student's mental health. School can make some measures to address these problems.To begin with,School should set more curricula in respect to mental health.Secondly,there are more activities concerned about communication should be organized for students.Students can be more health through communicating with other students.