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More and more students have the problems of mental health.Some students even commit suicide when they confront the problem of mental health.Consequently,it is of importance to improve student's mental health. School can make some measures to address these problems.To begin with,School should set more curricula in respect to mental health.Secondly,more activities concerned about communication should be organized for students.Students can be more health through communicating with other students.