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we are not smart if we concluded right now what we see and we hear.we have to think what is right and what is wrong.we are not myth,so we may make mistakes.After we obsereve it ,we don't have enough information to draw conclusions.Also,we can make some mistakes.sku sdh ;;odw a> '
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